A good-night write,do ya like?
winter is just sneeze away,
so plant your garden in the spring,
steady waters plant gardens in the spring
out of the blue,comes planted gardens
just in the spring,to be
so sleep now little darlings
only to awaken
to gardens in the spring...
Best Answer
The word sneeze is kind of off-setting for me. It creates the wrong imagery methinks, the wrong vibe. It's cute here, but in an I'm-totally-allergic-to-all-this-beauty way.
winter is just a breeze away,
I like that better.
or even- winter is but a breeze away.
But I love how peaceful it is, the last stanza is great.